What do you think of this scene? Good, bad? Constructive criticism?

I think it's good overall. But I'll be honest, it could use a little work! (: since you just wrote it I'm sure that once who edit it it will turn out better. What I would suggest is changing the last sentence, "knowing where to go", because right before the person was still trying to figure out where the "Fallen" was. So maybe you could mess with it a little to either make it clearer to the audience that the person knew exactly where the light had fallen, or instead of saying she/he knew where to go, make it so that they knew the "general area" of where it had fallen. Other than that, I just saw some things that I'm sure you will fix yourself! All in all I thought it was good! Hope this helps!